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Beginning
1 |
Developing
2 |
Accomplished
3 |
Exemplary
4 |
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Bangkok Hilton essay
Min 400 words
(10%)
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No
reference to the characters or gaol (i.e. the Bangkok Hilton) in the
movie. Issue of Justice not covered.
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Not
much reference to the characters or gaol (i.e. the Bangkok Hilton)
in the movie. Vague reference to Jutice. |
Very
good reference to characters and gaol in the movie, and evidence of
relating them to the question. Good reference to the issue of
Justice. |
Reference
to characters and gaol show and excellent understanding of how to
relate it to the question. |
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Did
not adequately address the issue of punishment. |
The
issue of punishment only addressed slightly. |
Obvious
evidence of a well developed argument and personal opinion regarding
punishment |
A
fantastically developed argument regarding punishment |
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No
website references provided showing little research. |
Only
provided one website as reference material. |
At
3 websites used as reference material. |
At
least 3 websites referenced with an extra relevant site found via
personal research of the web. |
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| No
reference material to support your argument regarding punishment.
No
structure to the essay. |
No
evidence of linking website reference material to your argument.
Essay
has structure but lacks substance. |
Very
accomplished essay with very good use of reference material to support
your argument. |
Essay
has excellent structure with great use of reference material to support
your argument. |
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